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2. SITI NUR ATIQAH BINTI KAMSAN
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3. MOHD FITRI BIN ABDUL MOKHTAR
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4. MOHAMMAD HANIF SAFUAN BIN ABU HASSAN
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6. MOHD TARMIZI BIN JUSOH
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WEEK 1

4 SUPERHEROES OF TAMPOI

Tampoi was once a peaceful small town, but that was before a cruel mayor came and partnered with a mad scientist. They planned to transform humanity genetically into Green Monsters so that both of them can get a control over the town and try to plant weeds and cocaine. All people live in frighten because there are no one who dares to step up and face the mayor and the scientist.

Meanwhile, there are 4 superheroes from different places visiting Tampoi at the same time. The do not know that Tampoi is not as peaceful as it was before. The superheroes are Iron Man, Spongebob, Popeye and Keluang Man. The man behind Iron Man is a tourist from Kuala Terengganu, he possesses an armour suit which can enable him to fly and navigates in almost all condition. Spongebob is spirit of a dead man who died after an accident occurred at the sponge-making factory where he worked. He is very flexible and capable to stretch to an unbelievable limit. Popeye, a retired sailor whose origin is from Serbia gains his super strength from a can of organic spinach. And then, there is Keluang Man who is always accompanied by his assistant, a cat named Tom. Keluang Man used to be an unsound man before recovering and become a part-time superhero. His assistant, Tom, always takes care of him and be his strategy planner. Both of them can communicate even though Tom is a cat, but no one knows about this.

On that bright day, the mad scientist works his formula and successfully invents toxic gas. The gas is detonated in the atmosphere and a large group of people transform into Green Monsters and make chaos. Coincidently, all 4 superheroes hear the scream and then rushing to rescue. Iron Man put on his amour suit, flies and navigates other superheroes to the scene. All the superheroes work together in a team and show the capabilities. Spongebob stretch his hands and contains all the Green Monster with his body. All the Green Monster cannot escape. Popeye brings his gigantic boat and asks Keluang Man to have some organic spinach. Both of them become super strong and lift all the Green Monster up and place them on the gigantic boat. 

Tom, Keluang Man’s assistant silently infiltrates the mad scientist lab and steals the formula to reverse the toxic gas effect. Tom brings the vaccines to Popeye’s boat and all the superheroes help to cure the Green Monster back to human being. 

After that, they go to get the mayor and the mad scientist. Keluang Man executes Silat Gayong and kicks the mayor and the mad scientist butts. The mayor and the mad scientist are so frighten that they swear they will not come to Tampoi again.

The peace of Tampoi is restored and people continue their lives happily thanks to the superheroes.

9 comments:

bedaljelah said...

we adore the way you write the story,the way you organize and deliver it.. we do not have problem with your language and grammar. interesting story line.creative and great work!!

S.A.F.K.A.H Factory said...

the moral value of this story are :
1) work as a team,
2) try to solve the problem,
3) helping the other people without prejudice

Biscuit Marrie said...

the story line is complicated and i cannot understand the story it all about. but it still interesting story.need to in prove the language and grammar.good luck for the next task.

the archers said...

thank you for the supportive comments.
we'll try our best in future. ;)

CottonCandy said...

the story is nice but its need more contents to make it more interesting..and at the ending we can already guest what will happen..for the moral value is teamwork and always help each others..

the archers said...

to bedaljelah,
thank you for your comment, we appreciate it. we are looking forward to hearing more comments from you guys in the future. hopefully you guys can give comments that can help us improve ourselves. let's cooperate..thanks a lot.. :)

the archers said...

to S.A.F.K.A Factory,
your way of figuring out the moral value from our story is good, we appreciate it. in the future, you could help us by giving constructive comments. We could help each other improve our skills. thank you..

the archers said...

to Biscuit Marrie,
It is quite good to have a contra comment than other groups. but, we are very hoping that you guys could show our mistakes so that we can correct them and do much better next time. cheers..

the archers said...

to cottoncandy,
your comment is the greatest 1 we have received so far. thank you very much. we were expecting for this kind of constructive comment which can help is doing better next time. we will try our best in delivering our assignments to beyond satisfaction. thank you..

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